Drosophila lab report help

[college101]

Hello, I am hoping someone will help me go over my lab report. I am almost done accept for my follow up experiment and so corrections I need to make in my organization but dont know how to. I dont need answers but someone well versed on the experiment to help me through it. I would like to finish it by 10PM tonight if anyone is available to help. please! Also I would like if we can correspond through email or something quicker .